Nobody Genius - #ATOZCHALLENGE – N (2026)
His frail and fragile
frame sat on his lone cot. The apple that lay in his dish was slowly browning. Still
good enough to consume, yet not desired. The 80-year-old Kishore Garodia
sat by his bedside nursing himself back from an upset stomach. His water
consumption was measured. Anything in excess of a litre would lead him to lose
the essential electrolytes he needed to preserve his aging frame.
Rakshit, the intern
from the government hospital, saw the ORS missing from the table. It triggered
in him a surge of concern that came out as anxiety, and a checklist that was
reinforced repeatedly by his medical college HOD.
“No, no tell me.
Should I ask the staff to get you ORS?”
Kishore looked on
calmly. The only answer he could give was a muted no. He lacked the strength to
placate the young doctor’s fretful tone.
“Your doctor’s prescription,
Kishoreji, I hope you have everything that is on it?” Geeta, the caretaker
interjected with the better intention of taking stock of the situation that
Rakshit has innocuously stirred up.
Rakshit couldn’t reign
in his anxiety. “No but he has to have his electrolytes.”
“Yes, sir. We will
ensure he does. Would you like to see our other patient?” She politely escorted
Rakshit to the other patient with a smile of compassion. It calmed his
adrenaline rushed a bit. Nurse Geeta had the magical smile that could make the
seniors forget their age-related perils. Not all were physical. Most were
emotional.
Kishoreji however
stayed aloof. He spoke only when it was necessary and didn’t venture far beyond
his dormitory room. To nurse Geeta he was the easiest to handle.
Geeta was hoping
Kishoreji would be thankful to her for leading the anxious Dr. Rakshit away
from an ailing old man who would much rather not have people experimenting on
him. Instead, he still wore his calm expression and got back to reading his
newspaper. In an era of smartphones, he was one person who never believed in
keeping even a basic cellphone.
Maybe he’s not
savvy, thought Rakshit.
“He probably doesn’t
know how to use one,” he mused to Geeta. “And that is good and not good.
No life without phones nowadays, isn’t it?”
Geeta sensed it was
better to be quiet and agree with an opinionated young doctor who always seemed
to nervy to be receptive. They exchanged niceties and parted ways.
“Do visit again
doctor?” She smiled her warm and endearing smile.
Rakshit returns a
broad and boyish smile back to her.
“Do you need anything,
Kishoreji?” She asked dutifully.
No. This was the only thing she heard. No more
words followed from Kishoreji.
The next day, Rakshit
brought his grandfather.
“Dadaji is
geriatrician. I talked him into coming and visiting the home with me.”
Geeta knew how
restless Rakshit could get and could visualize how the 70-year-old physician
might have reluctantly agreed.
“Doctor, would you
like me to get you a chair? If you want, I can send patients to you. You need
not go to the ward to meet them.”
The senior doctor drew
in a heavy breath and said,” No, thank you sister. I am here to meet just one.
His name is Kishore Garodia, and I think I know him.”
“He doesn’t talk to
anyone, Dadaji. Garodia uncle mainly keeps to himself.” Rakshit concluded from his impulse.
“Harshit! My dear
friend! How are you? So good to see you after all these years.”
Kishoreji, who was
struggling to stand yesterday, almost darted towards the senior doctor.
“Kishore? Is it really
you? I am so happy to see you. Just look at you. Still the stubborn rock you
always were. You decided to break ties with all of us.”
“Your grandson looks
exactly like you. I thought he would be related. You all have the doctor
genes.”
Geeta looked blasé. He
could have told her about the likely connection yesterday. Why did he remain
silent?
“Rakshit is still in
his final year, and as you might have seen, is itching to be a full-blown
doctor. In our days, we were ready to set up our own practice after graduation.
The studies were so much tougher. Technology has come a long way now. These
young guns need to be made profession-ready first. All kinds of internship
mandates have come up.”
“Yes, Harshu. I
agree.”
“But Kishya,
you still don’t own a cellphone. What are you doing? Give up now. You are old.
Anything can happen anytime. At least keep one for emergency, to call sister
Geeta.”
Kishoreji was indeed
stubborn as an ox. No amount of cajoling from Dr. Harshit could convince him to
keep a cellphone.
“What was Garodia
uncle really like?” asked Rakshit quizzically.
“He would read a lot
of Urdu poetry. Faiz was his favorite poet. In our days, we had no cellphones.
WhatsApp jokes and memes were non-existent. But in those days, we read quality
books, mainly from authors such as Jane Austen, Charles Dickens and George Elliot.
Because Kishore had learned Urdu, he would read poetry as well. All these
habits are so well ingrained in us, that we do not feel the need to rely on
gadgets. See, it has made you so impatient. On the other hand, Kishore, even
with so many ailments is able to pull along in this age. Give him something
that interests him and trust me you will see a different side of him.”
The next day, Rakshit
walked up to sister Geeta.
“Sorry if I rushed you
during my rounds. I am a true blue of this one-click generation. I have very
measured patience. Allow me to also add that you absorbed my anxiety
beautifully and were an absolute angel while assisting me on my rounds. You are
a true caregiver. Every intern’s dream nurse.”
“It’s my job! And no,
you didn’t rush me. I was happy that you came to see our patients.”
“I am definitely not a
sea of patience like Garodia uncle who has so much to talk about, but will bear
in silence. You know what, Dadaji said he likes to read poetry. I got him a
book by Faiz. Let’s see how he reacts.”
Sister Geeta was game
for this experiment. Anything to start a conversation with Kishoreji would be
worth it.
Rakshit walked up to
Kishoreji. “Uncle, my dadaji has sent you something. He said you will
like it.”
Upon seeing the words
“Faiz” written in urdu, Kishoreji’s inexpressive eyes widened in
excitement. “Wh-, Faiz? Dast-e-S-aba? Goodness, he wrote this while he
was in jail. Too much of an idealist. Just like me. He was a socialist in a
capitalist society. I was a social warrior all my life, so no woman ever stuck
with me. I was a lone ranger all along. But I needed to express all my ideals
somewhere. I wrote a few books, worked as a journalist for a leading paper, and
dabbled in media. I have seen the stars you chase today work on per-day
salaries. I have seen their struggle. Most have forgotten those days blinded by
the arch lights of popularity. As if that was not enough, your social media is
further messing with their heads. More easy recognition, even after doing
nothing but posing. I stay away from all such things.”
Both Rakshit and Geeta
listened wide-eyed. After years of quietude, one nostalgic connect was all it
took to get Kishoreji to talk. With what he had spoken about himself, Kishoreji
had many interesting stories to share. And when he was out of stories, there
was always poetry. He urged Rakshit to ditch his cellphone for a soulful poetry
book at least one day of the week after his rounds.
A role reversal ensued
in the next few months. A calmer Dr. Rakshit met with the patients. An excited
Kishorji often called upon sister Geeta, not because he was unwell, but because
he had so much shayari to tell.
The once nobody revealed the inner, well-read genius to everyone around him.
The contrast between generations adds so much depth. Really captures how connection can awaken a person.
ReplyDeleteThanks fo reading. What if Kishoreji met Tara? Would they hit it big? Ki lagchi?
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